One of the principles i see in this quote is it is asymmetrical in the way that it is separated into thirds and there is three highlighted words on one side and one on the far left side. Another is that the line is diagonal to create a little bit of contrast. It also uses proportion in the way that four of the words are different sizes than the initial quote. The rhythm of the design is "alteration" because it alternates between elements. Finally the Emphasis is on the four highlighted words of "Mind, Conceive, Believe, and Achieve.
I like the asymmetry of your quote, and the triangle is a brilliant addition. If you bold "conceive" or make it slightly larger, it might be easier to read on your blog.
its good, but its hard to read in some places, like the word "it". maybe you should have made the word "conceive" a bit bigger, but other than that everything looks good. the typography is good, and so are the elements and principles are good.
Really good quote and it is motivational. Some words are hard to read, Most are the ones you tried to put and empahsis on. The weird font on those makes since but is hard to read
I like the idea of the black triangle in the packground for added effect, but the way it has been puled off could have been done better. For example, the words "the" and "of" both miss parts of the letter when it goes from white to black. Tha random white line before "can" also should be fixed. The puprle word on black was hard to read, and it was kind of like you gave words random colors, it may be more effective to use colors that can relate to the word. Just simple things like that and the kerning of some words would make this much better.
its good, but its hard to read in some places, like the word "it". maybe you should have made the word "conceive" a bit bigger, but other than that everything looks good. the typography is good, and so are the elements and principles are good. I like the idea of the black triangle in the packground for added effect, but the way it has been puled off could have been done better. For example, the words "the" and "of" both miss parts of the letter when it goes from white to black. Tha random white line before "can" also should be fixed. The puprle word on black was hard to read, and it was kind of like you gave words random colors, it may be more effective to use colors that can relate to the word. Just simple things like that and the kerning of some words would make this much better. Really good quote and it is motivational. Some words are hard to read, Most are the ones you tried to put and empahsis on. The weird font on those makes since but is hard to read
I like the quote. And I like the fact that you put more design into it other than just in the words (meaning the black triangle in the back). And I like the emphasis on the more important words. But you might want to make the font a little bolder or bigger on the world conceive because it was a little straining on my eyes to read it. But other than that, Great job.
I like this quote. I like how you emphasized most of the words and the triangle in the back made it more modern. You might want to move some of the sentences around to make it more legible.
One of the principles i see in this quote is it is asymmetrical in the way that it is separated into thirds and there is three highlighted words on one side and one on the far left side. Another is that the line is diagonal to create a little bit of contrast. It also uses proportion in the way that four of the words are different sizes than the initial quote. The rhythm of the design is "alteration" because it alternates between elements. Finally the Emphasis is on the four highlighted words of "Mind, Conceive, Believe, and Achieve.
ReplyDeleteI like the asymmetry of your quote, and the triangle is a brilliant addition. If you bold "conceive" or make it slightly larger, it might be easier to read on your blog.
ReplyDeleteits good, but its hard to read in some places, like the word "it". maybe you should have made the word "conceive" a bit bigger, but other than that everything looks good. the typography is good, and so are the elements and principles are good.
ReplyDeleteI really like the asymmetry of this quote, and how you used color and the triangle.
ReplyDeleteReally good quote and it is motivational. Some words are hard to read, Most are the ones you tried to put and empahsis on. The weird font on those makes since but is hard to read
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of the black triangle in the packground for added effect, but the way it has been puled off could have been done better. For example, the words "the" and "of" both miss parts of the letter when it goes from white to black. Tha random white line before "can" also should be fixed. The puprle word on black was hard to read, and it was kind of like you gave words random colors, it may be more effective to use colors that can relate to the word. Just simple things like that and the kerning of some words would make this much better.
ReplyDeleteits good, but its hard to read in some places, like the word "it". maybe you should have made the word "conceive" a bit bigger, but other than that everything looks good. the typography is good, and so are the elements and principles are good. I like the idea of the black triangle in the packground for added effect, but the way it has been puled off could have been done better. For example, the words "the" and "of" both miss parts of the letter when it goes from white to black. Tha random white line before "can" also should be fixed. The puprle word on black was hard to read, and it was kind of like you gave words random colors, it may be more effective to use colors that can relate to the word. Just simple things like that and the kerning of some words would make this much better. Really good quote and it is motivational. Some words are hard to read, Most are the ones you tried to put and empahsis on. The weird font on those makes since but is hard to read
ReplyDeleteLike'in this quote. love the font change the random triangle the emphasis, shift in size but the purple was difficult to read
ReplyDeleteGreat quote. The font really emphasizes keywords, although they do appear smaller.
ReplyDeletei like the quote but i deffinitally couldnt read some of it. work on the visiblity.
ReplyDeleteI like the quote. And I like the fact that you put more design into it other than just in the words (meaning the black triangle in the back). And I like the emphasis on the more important words. But you might want to make the font a little bolder or bigger on the world conceive because it was a little straining on my eyes to read it. But other than that, Great job.
ReplyDeleteI like this quote. I like how you emphasized most of the words and the triangle in the back made it more modern. You might want to move some of the sentences around to make it more legible.
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